Citation Issues

Hey,

I'm trying to cite the 1939 England and Wales Register (census replacement but not a census)

In the image below you can see how I've done. I used the Evidence Explained Quick Model (Digital Images International Census U.K)

However, as I'm a beginner and new to all this I just want to check whether I'm doing things correctly from the start. 

So does this look good to you and if not how should I change it or approach it differently?

I'm struggling to find where in the Evidence Explained book how to cite a Electoral Register. Can't find anywhere in the book where it covers this, I know it must somewhere.

Here is what I have so far.
 

Footnote:

"Midlands, England, Electoral Registers, 1832-1965," database with images, Ancestry (https://www.ancestry.com: downloaded 1 June 2020), database entry for George William Whitehouse; citing "Midlands Historical Data; Solihull, West Midlands.".

My question is more of an editorial question than a citation question.  A website is treated as a book in a citation thus the title is italicized.  This is absolutely sensible.

I have an almost complete collection of family newsletters written between 1932 and 1953. EE 14.21 provides clear instructions on citing newsletter articles.

I'm trying to cite a birth registration from the FreeBMD site. When I run a search, there are times when the place name is abbreviated such as St Geo Hanover Sq. or Bradford YK. Is it acceptable to spell out the abbreviated place names in the citation or should it appear exactly as it does on the site?

Dear Editor,

Good evening,

My mother no longer has her 'original' birth certificate. She has two others, both of which are in my possession and I am having difficulty citing them.

The first one was issued in 1965, I believe she needed it to get married. The original didn't survive, so what I have is a photocopy. Complicating matters is that she was born in Brooklyn, her original birth record was filed in Brooklyn and this certificate was issued by the City of New York.

I have so so many questions...

It seems you are getting your fill of questions from me this week.

This post is related to one that I posted last week in which I had come across an Ancestry database which cited FamilySearch - but I could not find some entries in the database of the same name on FamilySearch. Well - I did find at least one entry and am thinking I should just cite the FamilySearch entry, but I am unsure how to cite it.

I've got a death certificate that the State of New York sent me years ago. I've uploaded my copy to FamilySearch so it's attached to the individual. The issue is that when they made my copy they didn't add in the certificate number. I've found that in the index so i'm adding that to my citation but including where i got the number. Here's my attempt

Should you note in a census citation, handwritten elements that are changing the dwelling and family numbers? Regardless of where I look, Ancestry or FamilySearch, I'm seeing the numbers crossed out and new written numbers both above and below the original numbers. Should these new numbers be included in the citation?